hopelessfangirl ([personal profile] hopelessfangirl) wrote2009-07-25 12:04 pm
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FIC/POEM: "I'm Not Good With Words" - Sawyer/Sayid (PG)

Title: I'm Not Good With Words
Fandom: Lost
Characters/Pairing: Sawyer/Sayid
Rating: PG
Word Count: 84
Spoilers: None
Summary: A haiku from Sawyer's perspective.
Disclaimer: I don't own Lost. At all.
Author's Notes: For [livejournal.com profile] haldoor, who requested Sawyer/Sayid and poetry, specifically haikus, at [livejournal.com profile] lostsquee's 2009 Luau. I've never written Sawyer/Sayid before and I have no idea where this came from, but I think it turned out alright, and I attribute that to your wonderful prompt, [livejournal.com profile] haldoor! I hope you like it!

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I'm not good with words;
It's easier using fists.
But I tried to talk.

Sayid's attention,
That is what I tried to get.
It worked, in a way.

I can tell he's smart.
A different type from me.
That's what intrigues me.

Sayid is the first
to extend an olive branch.
I want to take it.

But I know I can't,
Because deep down I know that
I need to stay smart.

Because Sayid's smart.
A different type from me.
That's what intrigues me.

 

[identity profile] lostpuffin.livejournal.com 2009-07-26 12:12 am (UTC)(link)
Wow.
I am amazed.
Poetry never drew me in much before... but this is fantastic.
You've got some wonderful talent for haiku.
:)

[identity profile] hopelessfangirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-26 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
I'm overwhelmed by such a positive response because I'm far from a poet, but I gave this my best shot. Thank you so much!

[identity profile] lostpuffin.livejournal.com 2009-07-26 04:40 am (UTC)(link)
You're a poet and didn't knowit.
*snerk*...........
*snort*..................
BAAAAAHAHA!
;)

[identity profile] hopelessfangirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-26 04:43 am (UTC)(link)
LOL, I should've seen that one coming!